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April 23, 2007
The Book of Taco - part 1a- if upon an afternoon a snacking....
Hey all- heres the comic that i've been workin on this month- I would LOVE
any feedback that y'all you could offer-This would be the first chapter of a 7 or eight chapter comic. Its sorta about my relationship with my dad, sorta.
Posted by felix at April 23, 2007 04:54 AM
Comments
Wow. That's really wonderful. I think the first couple of pages, the linework on the cityscape is a little too dim for my tastes, but maybe that's on purpose, I'm not sure? I love how it turns into a flashback, and I do kind of wish it came back out of it in the end, but overall, just lovely, especially the way you wrote Taco and the kid in the middle pages, after the father falls.
Posted by: Jeremiah Tolbert at April 24, 2007 10:03 PM