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December 18, 2007
More Robot Tragedy (now with even more tragedy!!)
Here is the comic i've been working away at- i just today (jan 26) tacked on 13 new pages and would love to hear what yall think!!!.
THE DENT


























so here are 13 new pages of the DENT...please let me know what you think, good bad or otherwise!!!





i still see another 15-30 pages- i think- i guess it depends on what style ending i finally decide on- again i would love to hear what yall are thinking out there- all comments mean alot to me
and heres a drawing i thought would be a good threadless tee- i dont know if it would, but i like the drawing quite a lot:

this would be on the back of the shirt:
Posted by felix at December 18, 2007 09:49 PM
Comments
I think this is my favorite thing you've done!
Posted by: Alex at December 19, 2007 04:16 AM
I'm really curios to see where you take this...good work!
Posted by: mike at December 20, 2007 12:52 AM
You use these beautiful drawings to communicate a very potent message---one that can be read on many levels. It's really wonderful.
Posted by: Susannah at December 20, 2007 02:50 AM
yeah, seriosly i love them bots
Posted by: klar at December 20, 2007 06:14 PM
Totally into the robots.
Posted by: Phil at December 30, 2007 06:30 PM
Loving your work. Let's get that robot stuff up dude! ;)
Posted by: Jess at January 24, 2008 06:04 AM
i want one of those bots as a tattoo!
Posted by: klar at January 30, 2008 07:06 PM
In the 38th panel (or so)— "No, I think it must of fixed itself..." should be "must've". I'd rather look at all your fun and quirky art than nitpick typos, but it stood out to me and I thought you'd want to know.
About everything else... To me, the theme is more powerful when it doesn't necessarily match the visuals. Like I said, "fun and quirky art" but the message is quite somber. I think it has a poignancy that wouldn't be there if the art style was grittier or in the noir vein.
Posted by: Kim at February 23, 2008 03:24 PM
So far, this is amazing! Can't wait to see the rest.
And did you ever finish the 'Taco' story? I noticed you took it off of here.
Posted by: Peter Manges at June 8, 2008 02:10 AM